Ah I love people as maps. (I have a landscape poem coming out in Blackmail Press soon... will send your way when it's here.)
I wonder if it needed to be longer to arrive at that ending... I imagined this taking a turn toward another -- toward a lover, a brother or sister? Dunno, just a thought... the ending came abruptly for me, if that makes sense. But I like the simplicity of it, very much indeed. :)
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Ah I love people as maps. (I have a landscape poem coming out in Blackmail Press soon... will send your way when it's here.)
I wonder if it needed to be longer to arrive at that ending... I imagined this taking a turn toward another -- toward a lover, a brother or sister? Dunno, just a thought... the ending came abruptly for me, if that makes sense. But I like the simplicity of it, very much indeed. :)
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