Renee Liang's blog on poetry, fiction, works-in-progress, the art of writing.
Ah I love people as maps. (I have a landscape poem coming out in Blackmail Press soon... will send your way when it's here.) I wonder if it needed to be longer to arrive at that ending... I imagined this taking a turn toward another -- toward a lover, a brother or sister? Dunno, just a thought... the ending came abruptly for me, if that makes sense. But I like the simplicity of it, very much indeed. :)
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