Monday, August 9, 2010
Tuesday poem: Body
I've just joined a new online poetry group, Tuesday poem . It's a wonderful way to get a fresh injection of poetic energy going into midweek (though I can't remember the last time I worked a "normal" 40-hour week). And for those of us with lazy poetic bones, it's a great stimulus for a stretch!
So: here's my inaugural 'Tuesday poem': actually a set of six sonnets, written as part of a larger project studying the archaeology of the person.
Brain
you swim
between islands
dive for words
sunken treasure
read the pulsation
of jellyfish
forget you can’t
breathe underwater
what you call memories
others call dreams
sometimes
you reach out
too far
and wake.
Lung
she once learnt
to tell the direction
of the wind
by wetting her finger
holding it up
to the sky
trying to understand
what cold was
now she’s been
to Antarctica
but still
she finds
most navigation
difficult.
Heart
she learnt
the valves
are tethered
like parachutes
that heart attacks
called infarctions
sound like
rude noises
that blood must balance
on both sides
and that
a healthy heart
tilts face upwards
like a question.
Liver
inside the liver
there are many suns
an inland river
ships and towns
factories and abattoirs
smelters and
storage towers
for sugar
a small girl standing
at a frosted window
her finger
drawing
a smiley face
on glass.
Spleen
that first day
she stood alone
in the playground
wet the wood chips
the following week
some big boys
pushed her
she lost her first tooth
after that she learnt
to keep her mouth shut
swallowed
her words whole
later spat them out
in silence.
Kidney
the principle of
countercurrent
exchange is like
two lovers kissing
talking
in tongues
limbs looped
in anticipation
the old Toyota
a warm uterus
to grow
new fruit
new dreams
new life.
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7 comments:
Welcome Renee. I love the life you've given to our organs. How luscious they;ve become. Thank you!
Hey Renee, Welcome to the community!
I enjoyed this, especially:
a healthy heart
tilts face upwards
like a question
I like the ideas, but not sure these are sonnets?
Hi Andie: you're right: I'm fairly loose in what sonnet 'rules' I follow. As I understand it, the rules for modern sonnets are mix+match according to taste: the only absolute is that the poem must have 14 lines. I'm also including a "volta" after line 8.
Happy to take opinions from the poetic assembly about whether I'm entitled to call my poems sonnets!
Really enjoyed reading these poems. Can they be found in your chapbooks?
Hi Lydia,
no they haven't appeared in chapbook form yet - these are part of a new cycle of 48 poems written as part of a collaborative project with artist Paul Woodruffe, for Metonymy 2010 (currently on at Corban Estate Arts Centre in Henderson until Oct 17). The work is called "Human Archaeology" - will post more poems from the cycle, plus picture, for a (very belated) Tuesday Poem!!
OK looking forward to reading more of these :)
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