tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8039612874763492670.post1911427010561374954..comments2023-09-19T17:49:56.522+12:00Comments on Chinglish: Tuesday poem: BodyPiokiwihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06093612075587719561noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8039612874763492670.post-10467235015543597422010-09-11T00:15:14.920+12:002010-09-11T00:15:14.920+12:00OK looking forward to reading more of these :)OK looking forward to reading more of these :)gnutehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04531420382594855447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8039612874763492670.post-19579661532957679732010-09-10T09:37:14.663+12:002010-09-10T09:37:14.663+12:00Hi Lydia,
no they haven't appeared in chapboo...Hi Lydia,<br /><br />no they haven't appeared in chapbook form yet - these are part of a new cycle of 48 poems written as part of a collaborative project with artist Paul Woodruffe, for Metonymy 2010 (currently on at Corban Estate Arts Centre in Henderson until Oct 17). The work is called "Human Archaeology" - will post more poems from the cycle, plus picture, for a (very belated) Tuesday Poem!!Piokiwihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06093612075587719561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8039612874763492670.post-33982979393049104692010-09-10T08:55:56.127+12:002010-09-10T08:55:56.127+12:00Really enjoyed reading these poems. Can they be fo...Really enjoyed reading these poems. Can they be found in your chapbooks?gnutehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04531420382594855447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8039612874763492670.post-56023035202043431272010-08-15T12:57:54.517+12:002010-08-15T12:57:54.517+12:00Hi Andie: you're right: I'm fairly loose i...Hi Andie: you're right: I'm fairly loose in what sonnet 'rules' I follow. As I understand it, the rules for modern sonnets are mix+match according to taste: the only absolute is that the poem must have 14 lines. I'm also including a "volta" after line 8. <br /><br />Happy to take opinions from the poetic assembly about whether I'm entitled to call my poems sonnets!Piokiwihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06093612075587719561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8039612874763492670.post-91252908533738367362010-08-14T23:26:02.760+12:002010-08-14T23:26:02.760+12:00I like the ideas, but not sure these are sonnets?I like the ideas, but not sure these are sonnets?Andiehttp://orson.boric@gmail.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8039612874763492670.post-46684142404373960522010-08-11T00:43:25.974+12:002010-08-11T00:43:25.974+12:00Hey Renee, Welcome to the community!
I enjoyed thi...Hey Renee, Welcome to the community!<br />I enjoyed this, especially: <br />a healthy heart<br />tilts face upwards<br />like a questionM40https://www.blogger.com/profile/03893690983708635717noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8039612874763492670.post-37905295160528903312010-08-10T20:46:08.360+12:002010-08-10T20:46:08.360+12:00Welcome Renee. I love the life you've given to...Welcome Renee. I love the life you've given to our organs. How luscious they;ve become. Thank you!Mary McCallumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07482261103185786111noreply@blogger.com